Jenny

Alright Shard, you're up!

I read through the Journal, and this seems like a very balanced character! Nothing really stands out as being bad, and it seems to be well-thought out and carefully made. I do like how you put little quotes by his perks and laws, it really helps us eleborate more on what he's like. I've read some of his RPs and I'm really loving this character, though I do see it quite often, he's the misunderstood tough guy. Nothing wrong with that, but what really makes him tick? Is there something that really peeves him? I also feel like you could tell us more about how he was around his parents, how did they help make him into what he is like today? Overall, good character, solid history, and you have done some really good RPs! Hope to see more in the future!

Hello RPers! Now many of you probably don't know me, I'm Jenny! I don't use my account very often, but I am actually a pretty active user here! I just don't use my account, so, yeah. ^.^ I love to read RPs, and I even have a list of my fav characters here! Do you want to know what I think of yours? Well, just ask for a review below and I'll do a review of your character! But be warned, I'm not pulling any punches when it comes to reviews. Also! Your character must be active, non-recent, and it must be something that you genuinely think is something you want reviewed. So send me a request and I'll type a review up! <3

Jenny stood and wiped the tears off her face. "Yeah, I'm feeling better." She then turned to face the boy she had bumped into and tried to apologize. "I'm really sorry, I wasn't watching where I was going..." She was distracted by some of the details this boy had. According to what this other girl said, he fought on front lines and his name was Keith. Keith seemed to be a fairly attractive, with silver eyes and dark blue hair. Jenny blushed and tried to cover up her small interest in his looks. "I'm Jenny, and you're Keith?" She said, reaching out a hand for a shake.

"I dont really know..."

Jenny looked down at the boy she had just hit, her eyes still blury with tears. "I-I'm sorry," She sniffed. "I'm just going through some things right now..." She got off him and dusted off her clothes. "Are you okay?"

Jenny sat at the Town of Beggining's main gate. She didn't like crying, but after learning the horrible truth about what Sword Art Online really is, she felt completely helpless. She used her sleeve to wipe away some tears and then she knealed down to the ground. "Please... I don't want to die..." She bit her lower lip and stood up again, sprinting off into town with her eyes blured with tears. 'So many people have already commited suicide, there really is no hope...'

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Profile

» Username: Jenny

» Real name: Jenny Rhodes

» Age: 16

» Gender: Female

» Height: 5'4"

» About: Jenny always loved video games. She started to play video games when her older brother offered to show her the basics. Jenny continued to play the online games when she was told at school that girls are "No Good" at them. She was determined to prove them wrong and played games whenever she could. Getting Sword Art Online is just another game she is eager to complete.

» Virtues:

Friendly - She is a genuinely sweet girl and can get along well with others..

Determined - She is able to drill at any task without discouragement, helping to avoid failure..

Optimistic - This helps her encourage others and give herself a confidence boost..

» Flaws:

Arrogance - She seems to sum up others rather quickly, and will proclaim she is better without time..

Ignorance - She is rather ditsy most of the time, and does things without thinking..

Gullible - She is far too over trusting of others, and basically hands them a knife to stab on her back..

Profession: N/A

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Archery

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Wooden Bow

Iron Arrows

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Cute!!! XD

Hi! I joined because I love SAO and I loves RPers! I'm not an RPer myself, I just love to read them! I finally made an account so I could show you guys how much I really love all the storys you do! You guys rock!