Aquamarine 0 Posted March 5, 2016 #1 Report Share Posted March 5, 2016 (edited) Profile Username: Aquamarine. Real Name: Marine Cadeen Age: 10 (At the start of Aincrad) 12 (at the end of aincrad) Gender: Female Height: 4'2 About: Aquamarine grew up with 3 brothers and a twin called Aqua. Aqua was older by 3 hours. Aquamarine was never really loved by her parents, Because they wanted one girl to call Jessie, But got twins.Aquamarine was always small and frail, and also weak. She was bullied in school and by her own brothers, Her parents did nothing. Aqua was always a popular child, Therefore Aquamarine had no one. Soon, Her aunt moved in with them in germany from Japan, and Brought a new game called Sword art online with a thing called nerve gear. Her aunt went in with Aquamarine, Now she just has to find her aunt...Who only loved her. Appearance Aquamarine has a bit of olive and pale skin mix. She is very frail from being ignored as a baby and being born 3 hours earlier as she was expected for 8 o clock but was born at 5 o clock. She wears a sailor girl to intimidate people and monsters. She's actually quite strong. She has blue hair usually down but It's quite short. She has a clip in the front. She has cute, big brown eyes. she has Shell necklace her grandmother gave her, before she died and she wears long white socks. she has pearl earrings. Personality Aquamarine is shy at first but opens up a lot once she gets to know you. She sees the world as a friendly place and wishes it was but knows the reality. she daydreams a lot and she thinks that if you have a child and a younger child, the younger child gets ignored. she learns a lot from her abusive parents. she sometimes acts like her sister but breaks down when she realizes. She doesn't want to think about reality and how much pain it is. She overall is a cute and shy little girl. History: Aquamarine was born as a twin. she was 3 hours earlier then she was supposed to be. She was loved at first but her parents favored her twin, Aqua. As they were born in march, theefore Aquamarine. Her brothers and twin bullied her and her parents ignored her. When she was 10, her Aunt came to live with them, all the way from Japan to Germany. She brought a game called sword art online and 2 nerve gears. She favored Marine (her real name) and inored the rest. All of them asked for the nerve game and sword art online, but she gave it to Marine. They still have yet to meet up... Virtues Intelligent: Aquamarine is very clever for her age and acts older then she is to prove she's clever. Sympathetic: Aquamarine is always sympathetic and makes herself falls into traps. Doesn't care what people think: Aquamarine doesn't care if anyone thinks her stupid. She only cares about her mean twin. Artistic: Aquamarine is very artisitc, but none of her family cares and she has all her paintings ripped to shreds. Flaws 1 Curious: She is very curious about the world and once her aunt gets in the car, she's asking all the questions she wondered. 2 gives in too easily: She gives into things way too easily, whether it's mean people or nice people. 3 quiet: Aquamarine is too quiet usually and in a group project, People don't think she'll speak so she doesn't get an input. 4 always waits until the last minute: Aquamarine is always late and waits until the last minute. Profession: None for the moment. Skills: cooking 1. Inventory: Sailor outfit, bread and clip. Dagger Relationships: Mother, Father, Aqua and 3 brothers and aunt. story thus far: Entered sao, looking or aunt. 4 health points. Edited March 6, 2016 by Aquamarine Quote Report Link to post Share on other sites
Takao 0 Posted March 5, 2016 #2 Report Share Posted March 5, 2016 Welcome to SAO-RPG! There are a few things that I'll have to ask you to change or expand upon before I'll be able to approve this journal. To start off, each of the virtues and flaws you listed are required to be a minimum of 3 sentences long. You're required to have 3 virtues and 3 flaws as well, so I'll have to ask that you add in one extra flaw. Regarding skills and stats, new characters start out with 5 SP. That means that your character would be level one upon creation, and would have 4 HP, in accordance to this guide. Additionally, achieving Rank 1 of any skill requires 5 SP, so if you could just fix that up, we'd be good. Feel free to send a PM my way when you're done and I'll come look over it again! Quote Report Link to post Share on other sites
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