KittyArtz 0 Posted June 21, 2016 #1 Share Posted June 21, 2016 Profile Username: Yukikana Real name: Hime Yukishiro Age: 11 Gender: Female Height: 4''11About: History/personality Hime was born in Tokyo, Japan on July 21 in the Yukishiro family. The Yukishiro family was a wealthy family and they lived in a beautiful mansion. Her older sister, Kana was a famous model. Her nickname was ''Angel Princess''. Hime was inspired by this and stepped forward to the world of biz when she was little. She also became famous at the age 9 and took over her older sister's nickname when Kana died. She studied at cram school and got good grades. She thought that something was still missing. That day, a lot of her fans gave her presents on her 11th birthday. She opened the box and saw a nerve gear. Her mother said that it was the nerve gear Kana used before she died. Hime tried it on and entered Sword Art Online. Her nickname was Yukikana because she thought it would let her remember her sister. It was revealed that Kana died when she was in Sword Art Online. Hearing this, the upset Hime took revenge on Kayaba Akihito and aimed to reach the 100th boss floor to reveal the creation of Sword Art Online and how it was created. Hime Yukishiro is a talented shy girl in the reality world. When she is in the reality world, it reminds her of Kana. She starts crying if she thinks about her older sister. On the other hand, in the virtual world as her avatar Yukikana, she feels relaxed and comfortable mixing with the atmosphere.Virtues:Bold and Courageous: Hime's catchphrase is ''Always walking a step forward!''. This explains that she is bold and courageous to keep going on into the virtual world. Sometimes, she is afraid of the bosses and monsters but she doesn't let this keep her down.Shy: Sometimes, Hime (Yukikana) is very shy because she doesn't know anyone in the virtual world. She tries to open up to the people in the town. The people noticed that she was shy so they let her become their friends. Beautiful: Her beauty attracts most of the people in town. This also makes her famous in the virtual world. They think she is beautiful because she is childlike and is believed to have magical powers although she really doesn't.Flaws:Flirty: She often teases with the boys that pick a fight with her. This gets her an advantage of running away. On the worst scenario, this can make people think bad of her.Immature: Hime mostly acts like a child and is believed to be immature. People mostly don't want to fight her because when she first came to the virtual world, she started doing stuff that didn't concern fighting. For example, when she was on the first floor, she asked a question, ''Where do I go?''Troublemaker: When people talk to her, she runs away. It makes them misunderstand Hime and gets her into a fight. This is usually because she is shy. Profession:Skills Non-combat: » Howl - No R - Cost 10 SPPassive: » Fighting Sprit - No R - Cost 10 SPCombat: » Hate - N/A R - Cost ? SPWeapon skills: » One-Handed Straight Sword - 5 R - Cost ? SPInventory Weapons/Tools: » One-Handed Straight Sword General SP - 5 Rank - 0 Status - Alive Link to post Share on other sites
Takao 0 Posted June 22, 2016 #2 Share Posted June 22, 2016 Welcome to SAO-RPG! Everything in your journal looks great! There's just one small continuity error in your history, and that's this bit: Quote She opened the box and saw a nerve gear. Her mother said that it was the nerve gear Kana used before she died. Hime tried it on and entered Sword Art Online. Her nickname was Yukikana because she thought it would let her remember her sister. It was revealed that Kana died when she was in Sword Art Online. The way this is worded makes it seem as though Hime entered SAO after the initial release, which wasn't possible. If you could just fix that bit up and send a PM my way, you'll be all set for approval! Link to post Share on other sites
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