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So, how does my journal look so far? It doesn't look to bad yet, does it?
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Looks great. Something I would recommend though: Don't use technology from this year. By 2022 (SAO time) Windows 10 may be really old.
Also, like Ariel said: Stick to your character.~
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Yea, drop the font size, and what everyone else says. You've got good depth to your backstory, but they're gonna look at virtues and flaws more than they will at background, so make sure that's the strongest section of your journal.
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Okay!
Thanks for the suggestions! Love to roleplay sometime!
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