Takao

Welcome to SAO-RPG! There are a few things that I'll have to ask you to change or expand upon before I'll be able to approve this journal. To start off, each of the virtues and flaws you listed are required to be a minimum of 3 sentences long. You're required to have 3 virtues and 3 flaws as well, so I'll have to ask that you add in one extra flaw. Regarding skills and stats, new characters start out with 5 SP. That means that your character would be level one upon creation, and would have 4 HP, in accordance to this guide. Additionally, achieving Rank 1 of any skill requires 5 SP, s

"'ey Ariel!" Takao called out as he stepped through the door, reveling in the warmth of the building that provided shelter from the cold winter themed floor. He'd stomped the snow off his boots before entering, which he'd long since come to realize was a pointless action given the technical limitations of the game world they lived in, and approached the counter with his usual smile stretching his cheeks. "Oikawa told me that the order was good to go, so I'm just swingin' by to pick it up. D'you want any materials or col for it?" - - +1 Huntsman's Set

Approved.

Approved.